Lets get to know you better

[DerikSilva]

Hi,
I am building a form for registration. In the first page it says to fill in basic details like mobile number, name and location. In the next page it asks more about the user like their profession, membership number, preferences, etc. So I need a heading for that page but whenever I give a heading I think its not perfect or some grammatical error is there.

What should I give the page heading? "Let us know you better" or "Lets get to know you better"? What else?

 

[emsr2d2]

Hi.

I am [STRIKE]building[/STRIKE] designing a registration form. [STRIKE]for registration.[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]In[/STRIKE] On the first page, it [STRIKE]says[/STRIKE] asks the user to fill in basic details like mobile number, name and location. [STRIKE]In[/STRIKE] On the next page, it asks for more information about the user, like their profession, membership number, preferences, etc. [STRIKE]So[/STRIKE] I need a heading for that page but whenever I [STRIKE]give[/STRIKE] come up with a heading, I think it's not perfect or that there are some grammatical errors. [STRIKE]is there.[/STRIKE]

What should I [STRIKE]give[/STRIKE] use as the page heading? Can I use "Let us know you better" or "Let's get to know you better"? What else could I use?

Please note my corrections above. Of the two you've suggested, only the second is grammatically correct (with the apostrophe). I would use "Personal information" or "Your details".

 

[emsr2d2]

After posting my response, I realised that you might have been asking only about a heading for the second page. My suggestion was for a heading for the whole thing. If you need separate headers for the two pages, I'd probably go with "Your details" for page 1 and "More details" for page 2.

 

[Tdol]

I think Let's get to know you better works for the second page.

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Notice that Let's needs an apostrophe. It's a contraction of Let us.