[Grammar] Mark, my life has been very hard.

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences correct?

"Mark, my life has been very hard. I would like to ask to the destiny, or the karma, or whatever, why my life is so hard? I've been a good son, a good brother, a good friend. Women seems to be always in love with the selfish idiot who doesn't love them."

Thanks,

 

[Raymott]

Hello.

Are the following sentences correct?

"Mark, my life has been very hard. I would like to ask [STRIKE]to the destiny, or the karma, or whatever,[/STRIKE] why my life is so hard. I've been a good son, a good brother, a good friend. Women seem to always be in love with [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] selfish idiots who don't love them."

Thanks,

I've never heard of anyone asking destiny or karma about reasons for things. But if you choose to say that, they don't take an article.

 

[Nikitus]

Dear Raymott:

First of all, thanks for your answer.

About karma and destiny, you are right. But some people in my country, had that (wrong) vision of the world.

Again, thanks!