Rachel Adams
Key Member
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
Could you please check this passage? Would it be wrong to omit "on" before 20 and when adding the name of the metro should the definite article be also capitalized?
"If you want to go to a meeting for new volunteers on 20 November, you must come to our office. Unfortunately, it's very far, but I will try to explain the way to you. First you have to come to the metro (name). Second, take a bus or a mini bus. Bus numbers 12, 25 34. Mini bus 23. It will take 20 minutes but on minibus ( I think it should be "by" not "on") it will take only 10 minutes. Further you will see a blue building. This building will be our office."
"If you want to go to a meeting for new volunteers on 20 November, you must come to our office. Unfortunately, it's very far, but I will try to explain the way to you. First you have to come to the metro (name). Second, take a bus or a mini bus. Bus numbers 12, 25 34. Mini bus 23. It will take 20 minutes but on minibus ( I think it should be "by" not "on") it will take only 10 minutes. Further you will see a blue building. This building will be our office."