Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"Once finished the first stage of his new self-imposed ritual, Tim left the building where he lived wearing and old shirt, blue shorts and sandals with socks. He walked a couple of blocks looking for the right place for the second stage, which he found near a plaza. In that place, Tim took a velvet pouch which contains his "lucky coins" out of his pocket shorts. Then, he took out three coins with a strange figure on one side and throws the coins on the floor."
Thanks.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"Once finished the first stage of his new self-imposed ritual, Tim left the building where he lived wearing and old shirt, blue shorts and sandals with socks. He walked a couple of blocks looking for the right place for the second stage, which he found near a plaza. In that place, Tim took a velvet pouch which contains his "lucky coins" out of his pocket shorts. Then, he took out three coins with a strange figure on one side and throws the coins on the floor."
Thanks.