Playing games often gives children a sense of pleasure

[Silverobama]

Someone asked me a question at a local English club. He asked me "Why do you think children like playing games?" when we were talking about that kids love playing with their friends and games. I thought about his question and said something like:

Playing games often gives children a sense of pleasure; they're happy when playing with their playmates. Games are usually intriguing and can therefore interest curious kids.They also more of less get a sense of achievement if those games are a bit competitive.

Please help me to make the paragraph natural and grammatical.

 

[tedmc]

Someone asked me a question at a local English club He asked me, - "Why do you think children like playing games?", when we were talking about that kids love playing with their friends and games. I thought about his question and said something like replied:

Playing games often gives children a sense of pleasure a lot of fun; they're happy when playing with their playmates other children. Games are usually intriguing and can therefore interest curious kids appeal to those who are curious. They also more of less get a sense of achievement if those games are a bit competitive from competing against each other.

Please help me to make the paragraph natural and grammatical.

 

[teechar]

Someone asked me a question at a local English club: . He asked me "Why do you think children like playing games?" when we were talking about that kids love playing with their friends and games. I thought about his question and said something like:

Playing games often gives children a sense of pleasure; they're happy when playing with other kids. their playmates. Games are usually can be intriguing and can therefore interest to (curious) kids.They also, more of or less, get feel a sense of achievement if those games are a bit competitive.