Please check this letter.

[Odessa Dawn]

[STRIKE]You’re unlike anyone else.[/STRIKE] You're the best person in Saudi society. And you’re incredible in every way, as a friend, classmate, and colleague. You always treat me with human dignity, better than anyone else. You (also) care about and listen to what I have to say. You never argue to win; rather, you want to learn and strength connections, and, therefore, it helps us get on really well together.

My relationship with you is a game changer in my life, and this, for me, much more rewarding. For years, you have been helpful and really friendly; you are one of a million. You were, and still are, the sort of man that I really like most—a decent human being and really a great man. Thank you.


Would you improve that letter?

 

[teechar]

[STRIKE]You’re unlike anyone else.[/STRIKE] You're the best person in Saudi society. And you’re incredible in every way, as a friend, classmate, and colleague. You always treat me with [STRIKE]human[/STRIKE] dignity, better than anyone else does. You (also) care about and listen to what I have to say. You never argue to win; rather, you want to learn and strength connections, and, therefore, it helps us get on really well together.

My relationship with you [STRIKE]is a game changer in[/STRIKE] has changed my life, and this, for me, is much more rewarding. For years, you have been helpful and really friendly; you are one [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] in a million. You were, and still are, the sort of [STRIKE]man[/STRIKE] person that I really like most— a decent human being and really a great man. Thank you.

I don't understand the parts in blue.

 

[Odessa Dawn]

Please check:

the best person in Saudi society=the best type of people in a society
argue to win=the type of people who like to argue to win the discussion
strength connections=to build a good relationship

 

[emsr2d2]

What do you mean by "best"? Nicest? Most helpful? Most polite? Most successful? Richest?

 

[Odessa Dawn]

Hi ems;


He is one of the nicest, most helpful, and most polite people in Saudi society.

 

[emsr2d2]

Then that's what you need to say.

 

[teechar]

argue to win=the type of people who like to argue to win the discussion

Use "press the point".

strength connections=to build a good relationship

That's okay.