rodgers white
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- English Teacher
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- Chinese
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Hi, there. These days I am teaching my students about how to write a report on something they did in a community. Please help me proofread and polish the following report whose title is "Students' Voluntary Work in a Neighbourhood":
Last weekend, some students took part in an activity organized by the Student Union. They did some voluntary work in a nearby neighbourhood. Once they got there, they divided themselves into small groups to do different jobs. Some cleaned the street corners; some watered the plants; others helped the elderly with their housework.
The activity was much praised by the neighbourhood and the students also enjoyed it. They got to know the society better and learned how to help people around.
Sometimes I just want to use the proper words and make my writing more authentic and cohesive. Thanks to this forum, I have the chance to improve my practical writing. So please accept my thanks in advance.
Last weekend, some students took part in an activity organized by the Student Union. They did some voluntary work in a nearby neighbourhood. Once they got there, they divided themselves into small groups to do different jobs. Some cleaned the street corners; some watered the plants; others helped the elderly with their housework.
The activity was much praised by the neighbourhood and the students also enjoyed it. They got to know the society better and learned how to help people around.
Sometimes I just want to use the proper words and make my writing more authentic and cohesive. Thanks to this forum, I have the chance to improve my practical writing. So please accept my thanks in advance.
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