[Grammar] please help me to correct grammer for statement

[bhatt]

I am sorry to hear about complaints and sorry for delayed reply.

On 29Dec, I was working evening shift.It was very busy and I was not feeling very well. Flight was delayed. Some luggage on the belt and some passenger were waiting for their bags at the time we left. My supervisor left polite notice for customer to fill their details if they missing any luggage. We left work premises after midnight. There were no issue at the time we left.

 

[tedmc]

Please sort out the following when you post:

- capitalization at the beginning of a sentence.
- spacing between sentences after a full-stop
- spellings of common words

not a teacher

 

[bhatt]

Thank you for advise.I have edited as per your suggestion.Is it okay to submit my personal statement?

 

[emsr2d2]

Thank you for your/the advice. I have edited as per your suggestion. Is it okay to submit my personal statement?

Not yet. Tedmc's second piece of advice was to sort out the spacing around your punctuation. Here are the rules:

- Do not put a space before a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
- Always put a space after a comma, full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.

You didn't follow those rules in this post, and you have missed one spacing correction in post #1.