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Hello, I have aspergers and adhd, I think in pictures/small bits of information while growing up, and would like to combine all this information into writing towards a neuro-typical crowd.

These are some of the subjects that I would like to write about:

SOME ADVANCEMENTS IN NEUROSCIENCE MAY BE AGAINST HUMAN RIGHTS:

mass hypnosis
trigger words
propaganda
game theory
paranoia
God,science, 1st, 2nd,3rd parties and government, is watching us.
canadian security intelligence service
politics
mass product placement
control, authority and history
media propaganda and mass disinformation
neuroscience
astrophysics
canadian law
gang stalking
targeted individuals
psychotronic weapons
google spys
facebook spys
smart tv spys
cell phone spys
daarpa
neurobiology of narratives
remote neuro monitoring
csis: canadian special intelligence society
electronic control grid
aspergers
nsa
neuralplasticity
superior intelligence and wisdom
artificial intelligence
Jesus is Lord
Father, Son and Holy Spirit is God
Free Speech
brain washing
forced chemical injections
biology
chemistry
advanced science
Man consists of spirit, soul and body
teach the way people learn
mass drugging of humans was masterminded in nazi germany using synthetic chemicals
some if not all, psychiatric drugs dehumanize, torture, disable and kill
will not remain silent
government trust?
one nation under surveillance
cyper intelligence vs wisdom
while you sleep mass media creates your reality, they tell you your morals and how to act/react, what to buy etc, they are your moral compass
people no longer need to go to church or read the bible, they get all their morality from media/government etc
people volunteer to be wire-taped etc
ABPN
neuroscience
people at the highest level of government that do not want canada, to be canada

I Have a lot more, but would like to keep it manageable for now, thanks you for reading. Any advice would be highly appreciated.

I can probably take out some of the subjects in the list?

Most, if not all of these main subjects, branch off into minor subjects.

What I am trying to do, is to put all this information together into small neat comprehensible writings on where later I can review, revise, and then combine into larger writings, then eventually into the largest final writing.

I know there is a system people use that may help me be better understood.
 
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Hello, I have Asperger's and ADHD. I thought in pictures and small bits of information while growing up (No comma. It's not a compound sentence.) and would like to combine all this information into writing for a neuro-typical crowd.

These are some of the subjects that I would like to write about:

advancements in neuroscience that violate human rights (Don't treat this as the title of the list. It's just one topic on the list)
mass hypnosis
trigger words
propaganda
game theory
paranoia
God, (space) scientists, first, second, (space) third parties and government are watching us.
the Canadian Security Intelligence Service
politics
mass product placement
control, authority and history
media propaganda and mass disinformation
neuroscience
astrophysics
Canadian law
gang stalking
targeted individuals
psychotronic weapons
Google spies
Facebook spies
smart TV spies
cell phone spies
DAARPA
neurobiology of narratives
remote neuro-monitoring
CSIS: Canadian Special Intelligence Society (Isn't that Canadian Security Intelligence Service?)
electronic control grid
Asperger's
nsa
neuralplasticity
superior intelligence and wisdom
artificial intelligence
Jesus is Lord
Father, Son and Holy Spirit is God
free speech
brainwashing
forced chemical injections
biology
chemistry
advanced science
Man consists of spirit, soul and body
teach the way people learn
mass drugging of humans was masterminded in nazi germany using synthetic chemicals
some if not all, psychiatric drugs dehumanize, torture, disable and kill
will not remain silent
government trust (delete question mark)
one nation under surveillance
cyber-iintelligence versus wisdom
While you sleep, mass media create your reality. They tell you your morals and how to act and react and what to buy. They are your moral compass.
(Sentences don't fit your list. Your other list items are just adjectives and nouns. You should stick with that for the entire list. You could also take this off the list and and place it elsewhere.)
People no longer need to go to church or read the Bible. They get all their morality from media and government.
(Again, full sentences don't belong in your list.)
People volunteer to be wire-tapped.
(Again, this shouldn't be a sentence. Look up parallelism.)
ABPN
neuroscience
People at the highest level of government who do not want Canada (no comma) to be Canada

I Have a lot more (no comma) but would like to keep it manageable. (Delete for now. You want it to be manageable later, too.) Thank you for reading. Any advice would be highly appreciated.

I can probably take out some of the subjects in the list. (Only use question marks for questions.)

Most (no comma) if not all of these main subjects (no comma) branch off into minor subjects.

What I am trying to do (no comma) is to put all this information together into small neat comprehensible writings that I can review and revise later and then combine into larger writings and eventually into the largest final writing.

I know there is a system people use that may help me be better understood.

One system is called outlining. You can Google it. Another is called rhetoric, which you can also Google. You can also Google essays. (Ignore the essay writing services and read the articles about how to write them yourself.)

That's an ambitious project! It will be quite a journey. Enjoy it!
 
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They you your morals


There's a word missing there.

Edit: I spotted a missing word when I was reading your corrected version so I quoted it so the OP could provide the missing word. However, I then realised that it wasn't missing in post #1. It had mysteriously vanished in your edit. I put it back in.
 
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I've reinstated post #3 and added an explanation.
 

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I get it now. That was some careful reading. Thanks!
 

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I wonder where Doctor Blue went. It was an interesting post.
 
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