Restoring preserving and protecting architecturally significant buildings in Hungary

[veneziadrive]

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Restoring Preserving and Protecting architecturally significant buildings in my country

The importance of protecting architecturally significant buildings is crucial these days in Hungary. Walking around in the city of Budapest you are to see wonderful buildings which were built centuries ago and in my opinion it is really sad to see how time destroys them. There are places, especially in downtown where you may see the government has already paid attention to these, and delegated specialists to restore them. And this is only what we see from the outside. Churches, mansions, cathedrals have wonderful architectural things to look at from the inside, but these are at risk as well. Buildings do need to get the attention to every single building that we have, it’s just a hard thing because of all finances. When the question arises, what can you do about it? Well, you can definitely watch out for vandals in the city who think it is creative to spray graffities on walls – you might want to report these to the police to keep your city a better place. Having guards in and close to churches is another thing maybe people should consider.

 

[emsr2d2]

Do you have a question for us?

 

[veneziadrive]

Yes, however I don't understand how come it is a new thread here...
I wanted to know my istakes, or how to improve my writing. I'm practicing for a language exam.

 

[emsr2d2]

Yes. However, I don't understand how come it is a new thread here.
I wanted to know my mistakes (no comma here) [strike]or[/strike] and how to improve my writing. I'm practicing for a language exam.

See above. It is right that this is a new thread. You need to start a new thread for each new piece of writing. Perhaps one of the moderators moved it to its own thread.

 

[teechar]

Perhaps one of the moderators moved it to its own thread.

I did, indeed.

 

[tedmc]

The [STRIKE]importance of protecting[/STRIKE] preservation of architecturally significant buildings is crucial these days in Hungary. Walking around in the city of Budapest, you[STRIKE] are to[/STRIKE] see wonderful buildings which were built centuries ago. [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] In my opinion, it is really sad to see how time destroys them (how they deterioriate with time). There are places, especially in downtown, where you [STRIKE]may[/STRIKE] see that the government has already [STRIKE]paid attention to these[/STRIKE] taken measures to address the problem, and [STRIKE]delegated[/STRIKE] engaged specialists to restore them.

I have heard about the beautiful city of Budapest and would love to visit it one day.

 

[tedmc]

And this is only what we see from the outside. Churches, mansions, cathedrals have wonderful architectural things(elements) to look at and experience [STRIKE]from the [/STRIKE]inside, but these are at risk of crumbling/falling apart as well. Buildings do need to get the attention to [STRIKE]every single building that we have[/STRIKE] details, [STRIKE]it’s just a hard thing[/STRIKE] which is difficult because of it is all about finances. When the question arises, what can you do about it? Well, you can definitely watch out for vandals in the city who think it is creative to spray graffities onto walls – you might want to report these to the police to [STRIKE]keep[/STRIKE] make your city a better place. Having guards[STRIKE] in and close to [/STRIKE] for churches is another thing maybe people should consider.

Funds for the preservation and maintenance of old building can be generated by making visitors pay entrance fees, which is common.