contiluo
Member
- Joined
- Apr 12, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
I'm confused by sentence #1, so I rewrite it as #2. How to correct #1? In #3 and #4, which is better?
1. She often criticizes me for the things I do wrongly or doing things in a wrong way.
2. If I do something wrong, she will condemn my foolish behavior.
3. Although sometimes she is too strict with me, I am very appreciative of the admonitions and concerns she gives me.
4. Although she is sometimes a bit strict with me, I appreciate her admonitions and concerns.
1. She often criticizes me for the things I do wrongly or doing things in a wrong way.
2. If I do something wrong, she will condemn my foolish behavior.
3. Although sometimes she is too strict with me, I am very appreciative of the admonitions and concerns she gives me.
4. Although she is sometimes a bit strict with me, I appreciate her admonitions and concerns.