alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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The boulevard became the playground of the rich. They would come at warms nights to burn rubber up and down the boulevard in their uber cars and max out their credit cards at the extravagant shops and restaurants that lined it. Alex worked as a store assistant at a watch gallery towards the end of the boulevard. Every day he would sell watches more expensive than most people's houses to oligarchs who had nothing to do but to splurge their ill-gotten gains. To Alex, they looked like a different species. Most of them had their chins and jaws sculpted by fine surgeons, and their lips pumped by chemicals and coated by the most expensive of lip balms. There was an air of pretension about them that made it difficult to connect with them.
The boulevard became the playground of the rich. They would come at warms nights to burn rubber up and down the boulevard in their uber cars and max out their credit cards at the extravagant shops and restaurants that lined it. Alex worked as a store assistant at a watch gallery towards the end of the boulevard. Every day he would sell watches more expensive than most people's houses to oligarchs who had nothing to do but to splurge their ill-gotten gains. To Alex, they looked like a different species. Most of them had their chins and jaws sculpted by fine surgeons, and their lips pumped by chemicals and coated by the most expensive of lip balms. There was an air of pretension about them that made it difficult to connect with them.