diamondcutter
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#3. Self-expression leads to self-fulfillment
My mother makes her own clothes. She has never seen the value of passing trends, and instead has always created clothes she felt like wearing and was comfortable in. Soon enough, people were asking her to make clothes for them, and it turned into a full-time business. Being exposed to that showed me how you can make a career by expressing yourself creatively--and be completely happy doing so.
Source: https://pulptastic.com/10-things-my-cool-mom-taught-me/
Self-expression leads to self-achievement.
My mother made her own clothes she felt like wearing. Soon enough, people asked her to make clothes, and it turned into a full-time business. That shows me how you can set up your own business by expressing yourself truthfully.
Source: English test paper, Henan Province Senior High School Entrance Examinations, 2020
The lower passage is adapted from the upper one.
I have several questions about them.
About the original version:
1.“My mother...has always created clothes she felt like wearing and was comfortable in.” I think the verbs “felt” and “was” should be “feel” and “is” because his mother “has always created clothes”.
2.I don’t quite understand the pronoun “that” in “Being exposed to that”. Does it refer to his mother making clothes she likes?
3.In “Being exposed to that showed me how you can make a career by expressing yourself...”, I think the word “how” is redundant because the “by expressing yourself...” phrase tells the way. What do you say?
About the adapted version:
4.The test version changed “people were asking” to “people asked”. I don’t think both versions are not good enough. Maybe “people began to ask” is better.
I’d like to read your comments. Thanks in advance.
My mother makes her own clothes. She has never seen the value of passing trends, and instead has always created clothes she felt like wearing and was comfortable in. Soon enough, people were asking her to make clothes for them, and it turned into a full-time business. Being exposed to that showed me how you can make a career by expressing yourself creatively--and be completely happy doing so.
Source: https://pulptastic.com/10-things-my-cool-mom-taught-me/
Self-expression leads to self-achievement.
My mother made her own clothes she felt like wearing. Soon enough, people asked her to make clothes, and it turned into a full-time business. That shows me how you can set up your own business by expressing yourself truthfully.
Source: English test paper, Henan Province Senior High School Entrance Examinations, 2020
The lower passage is adapted from the upper one.
I have several questions about them.
About the original version:
1.“My mother...has always created clothes she felt like wearing and was comfortable in.” I think the verbs “felt” and “was” should be “feel” and “is” because his mother “has always created clothes”.
2.I don’t quite understand the pronoun “that” in “Being exposed to that”. Does it refer to his mother making clothes she likes?
3.In “Being exposed to that showed me how you can make a career by expressing yourself...”, I think the word “how” is redundant because the “by expressing yourself...” phrase tells the way. What do you say?
About the adapted version:
4.The test version changed “people were asking” to “people asked”. I don’t think both versions are not good enough. Maybe “people began to ask” is better.
I’d like to read your comments. Thanks in advance.