This is my English diary for today./This is an entry from my English diary for today.

[diamondcutter]

If I want to show what I wrote in my English diary for today to an English teacher and ask him/her to have a look and correct any mistakes he/she finds. Which version below is correct to say in this context?

1.This is my English diary for today. Would you please have a look and correct any mistakes you find?

2.This is an entry from my English diary for today. Would you please have a look and correct any mistakes you find?

 

[Tarheel]

The second one is better. I might say:

This is today's entry in my English diary.

 

[diamondcutter]

Thanks, Tarheel.

Do you mean the first one is acceptable?

 

[Tarheel]

No. It's not your English diary for today unless you have a new one every day. (That's very unlikely.) Instead, you are talking about the entry in the diary for that day.

 

[emsr2d2]

If I want to show what I wrote in my English diary for today to an English teacher and ask him/her to have a look and correct any mistakes he/she finds, which version below is would be correct? to say in this context?

1. space here This is my English diary entry for today. Would you please have a look and correct any mistakes you find?

2. space here This is an the entry from my English diary for today. Would you please have a look and correct any mistakes you find?