To examine the possibility of supercooling being used in medical technology for human

[middleage S]

To examine the possibility of supercooling being used in medical technology for humans and other living things, comparisons between liquids of different purity are needed.

Does the above sentences seems natural? I want to say that comparisons(between liquids of different purity) are needed to check whether supercooling can be used in medical technology for humans and other living things.

 

[Skrej]

It's okay. There are probably ways to make it more concise.

 

[GoesStation]

Is there a form of medical technology that isn't for humans or other living things?

 

[Tarheel]

To examine the possibility of supercooling being used in medical technology for humans and other living things, comparisons between liquids of different purity are needed.

Does the above sentence[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] seem[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] natural? I want to say that comparisons between liquids of different purity are needed to check whether supercooling can be used in medical technology.

Note changes to text.

 

[Tarheel]

To examine the possibility of supercooling being used in medical technology, comparisons between liquids of different purity are needed.

There!
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