nuclearegg69
Member
- Joined
- Jan 7, 2024
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Arabic
- Home Country
- Egypt
- Current Location
- Egypt
v1: Study skills, such as effective note-taking, the SQ3R method, and time management, and techniques such as mnemonic devices and flashcards, can help students achieve their objectives in their classes.
v2: Students can achieve their objectives in their classes with effective study skills, such as effective note-taking, the SQ3R method, and time management, and techniques such as mnemonic devices and flashcards.
What i can observe:
in v1
bad: the subject is very long until we come to the action verb 'help', dont know if this is a problem.
good: 'study skills' is the focus being the subject, and it is also the focus of the essay
v2: Students can achieve their objectives in their classes with effective study skills, such as effective note-taking, the SQ3R method, and time management, and techniques such as mnemonic devices and flashcards.
What i can observe:
in v1
bad: the subject is very long until we come to the action verb 'help', dont know if this is a problem.
good: 'study skills' is the focus being the subject, and it is also the focus of the essay