Your sister gave me your email address so i can send you our logo

[Joj]

Dear,

Your sister gave me your email address so i can send you our logo and help us to modified.
We will stick to the logo and please help us with the following to make it less crowded.
We will keep the font of the logo and the slogan but we need to eliminate the black frame

 

[tedmc]

Dear,

Your sister gave me your email address so i can send you our logo. and Please help us to modified improve on it.
We will stick to use the logo and please help us with the following to make it less crowded but would like to make the following changes.
We will keep the font of the logo and the slogan but we need to eliminate the black frame

What do you mean by the underlined part. Do you mean the background?

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear [name]

Your sister gave me your email address so I can send you our logo and help us to modified for modification.
We will want to stick to with the basic design of the logo and please help us with the following but we need your help to make it look less crowded.
We will want to keep the font of the logo and the slogan but we need to eliminate lose the black frame.

Note my corrections above.