Re: Alice in Wonderland: A Play for A Novel?
Additionally, you will never have any introspection in a play. You won't see "she wondered whether" or "he was intensely frightened" or other things that tell you how the person was feeling or what they were thinking. You won't have large passages of description. You need to find a play that was written as a play and see how it's set out, as 5jj expressed previously and you'll see immediately how they differ.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.