Help on dialogs

[ediblegrammar]

Hi,

AB : What are you doing, Wayne?

WAYNE : I’m eating.

AB : You are still eating? We’re already late!

WAYNE : Are you sure?

AB : Yes! I already told you, right?

WAYNE : You did? But nevermind! I’m sure they’ll wait for us. Have you eaten?

AB : Yes, I have. Could you eat faster?

WAYNE : Sure!

Anything wrong with the dialog? Maybe on grammar or sentence structure?

Thank you.

[Raymott]

Hi,

AB : What are you doing, Wayne?

WAYNE : I’m eating.

AB : You are still eating? We’re already late!

WAYNE : Are you sure?

AB : Yes! I already told you, right?

WAYNE : You did? But nevermind! I’m sure they’ll wait for us. Have you eaten?

AB : Yes, I have. Could you eat faster?

WAYNE : Sure!

Anything wrong with the dialog? Maybe on grammar or sentence structure?

Thank you.

The grammar and sentence structure are good. Whether that makes it a good dialogue is another point.

[ediblegrammar]

Thank you! Phew.

[5jj]

Never mind. Two words.