Democracy

[binsadan]

Hello everyone,

Please help me to improve my writing and thinking skills through correct and comment on my short essay.

Democracy in Saudi Arabia

let's ask the right question. Is the democracy applicable in Saudi Arabia? Before we start answering this question, we have some points that should be highlighted. First of all, it is known that Saudi Arabia has a lot of tribes throughout the country. Second, the people of Saudi Arabia has different culture and believes, so it has to be understood first. Third, it is recognized that if a certain political system appropriate for certain country, it does not mean that it has to be the appropriate political system for another country.












Please check the essay for me. I tried to complete it by writing thesis statement in the end of this article, but unfortunately i couldn't.




Best regards,

[Gillnetter]

Hello everyone,

Please help me to improve my writing and thinking skills through correct and comment on my short essay.

Democracy in Saudi Arabia

let's ask the right question. Is the democracy applicable in Saudi Arabia? Before we start answering this question, we have some points that should be highlighted. First of all, it is known that Saudi Arabia has a lot of tribes throughout the country. Secondly, the people of Saudi Arabia has have different culture and believes beliefs, so it this has to be understood first. Thirdly, it is recognized that if a certain political system is appropriate for a certain country, it does not mean that it has to be the appropriate political system for another country.


You write that the people of Saudi Arabia have many different cultures and belief systems - why is this important? Most countries are similar in this respect. For a moment, forget what you have been taught and think about what political system would make the majority of the people happy and what political system would help people prosper the most. Imagine this - you are to select 1,000 people from various countries. You are to put these people on a newly discovered piece of land - this new land has no neighbors. Next, you are to tell them that they have three months to decide on the type of government they want. What would be the common ideas that these people would come up with? What type of political organization would they develop?









Please check the essay for me. I tried to complete it by writing thesis statement in the end of this article, but unfortunately i couldn't.




Best regards,

Gil