- 1 Post By mksarma
A dialog in my story.
It is in a warfare and the dialog goes like:
Antagonist to the protagonist and his army: Bury those in extremis rules and trot on them. They are meant for a filth not for a victor. Come to me, and see what a true lord can offer to his servants.
Protagonist to his own army: Lord? If they call the traders of loyalty with that name, they need to invent a name for you, the guards of trueness. Heed not to him, lead into battle. Let our destiny decide whether we stand before our loved ones, back at homes, with glory of victory, or stand before our fathers in heaven, with pride and regard.
Can you please check if the statements are fine, or can be made any better?
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