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......Luke and Richard were very proud of themselves. They both smiled to her in a strange feeling. Becasue what they saw on her face was a beautiful, sweet and charming, their heart seemed to be jumb out of their chest.....
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They could not know yet, but that would be just the first of a series of events. They took the woman to a save and calm place and she told them that she was coming from a world different from the world they knew and ever heard of...
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Richard and Luke canīt believe what theyīre hearing...
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.....They had alot of questions in their mind about that woman; how she got their place? where she came form? .......
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.....They had alot of questions in their mind about that woman; how she got their place? where she came form? .......
And in a wink of an eye, the woman transfigured in front of them into a green one-eyed creature with 6 hands. And sheīs got tails and feet like duck.
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...."She may have came out from the water" Richard thought...
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And at the same moment a horrible noise was heard, ĻAaarrrrrrrhhhhhuuuuuuuwwww!!!Ļ
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.....that noise echoed from everywhere. "Where the noise come from?" Luke asked. Without any hesitation, Richard shouted out "Who's that....??".......
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Out of the bushes came out a horrible beast...
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That bushes had a very big mouth, sharp teeth, and had a long,long fur cover their body. It looked yaky, disturbed, disgusting that words can not be put to express its appearence.........
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