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Old 09-Oct-2007, 02:56
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And apparently, itīs heading towards their direction.
Luke and Richard wants to run and hide but their glued to where they are for fear, they cannot move.

The beast is coming close...
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"It's coming! It's coming" Luke spoke in frieghten voice. Rechard's leg were shaking too, but he kept calm and quiet....
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The beast came near and near to them and their heart starting beating fast... Luke said we will be soon devoured by this beast, O' God save us, Beast came near to them and open his big mouth and said:" My mama didn't give me breakfast today, I am very hungry.Could you please make some breakfast for me , I will be very thankful to you."
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The brothers were hung up of what they heard from the beast...

And the alien lady...
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and the Alien lady was actually a beast Mom, she came from island of beasts, she was tranformed herself in the beautiful lady in search of fruits for his mischevious son,........
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"What shall we do?" Luke asked. "I think we should run..." Richard answered, "NOW!!!"
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"Please, don't go!" Beast's mother offer. " Please help my son. He's really hungry now" she said. After the moment of frieghten, Luke and Rechard felt pity on that ugly looking creature.
Beast's mother said" We are not harmful to anyone. We eat only fruit in the jungle. So, don't feel afraid of us"..........
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Richard and Luke gave each other indecisive looks. This family before them is out of this world and they have not a bit of an idea from where they came from and what are they.

But they stopped halted... and looked back....
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....After making decision, Luke and Rechard agreed to bring both of Beast Mother and son to their home. Along the way home.............
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Along the way home, suddenly heavy rain started with thunder storm......
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