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May be if I enter the house, I could find out the hidden mystery behind this...........
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But alas! I found out that I wasn't man enough. I didn't have the courage to go in alone, for fear of what may be lying in wait for me...
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Instead, the door fragmented into sand and scurried off by itself.

'Closing this door once again is going to prove an interesting task,' he thought blithely to himself.

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..." Maybe it's just a fake; it's not real" Luke convinced himself....
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And Richard looking from behind saw figures of men in the thick fog...
"Somebody there?" He called out, but no one answered.
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then with a little pause Richard called out again, there came strange voices.........
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The winds blew. (the wind rustled)
"It getting cold here outside" Luke commented, "Let's go in."

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..And once they walked close to the door, the door opened by itself. The gloomy inside with a cold, decay air came out when the door was opened.
"It's so dark and scary, Rechard" Lude said in tremble voice.... The wind out blew stronger and stronger.........
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They felt a little bit scared, then..........
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A storm suddenly came, and they were blown into the room. It was drak, smelt, and.........
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...ragged. Richard was thinking of going to be dead because he was afraid of darkness. Suddenly, they hear a wild voice (horrified)....a roaring lion appear then with the heavy hungry eyes (luke shocked)....

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