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Luke rubbed his eyes in unbelief, "This is not an illusion."
"What should we do?"
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She never knew her parents, and was raised on a farm outside of town. The family who cared for her were polite, hard-working people who loved her very much, and she loved caring for the animals. All of that changed when ....
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Luke rubbed his eyes in unbelief, "This is not an illusion."
"What should we do?"
Everything seemed to be vanished when they tried to look at the dark again. In the room of the darkness that had a decay smell was transformed to a beautiful park with a warmth sunshine. "Where are we? " Luke wondered.
They had been at another world after they cross the entrance door....
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there were big trees laden with tasty and colourful fruits, lush green grass and varities of beautiful flowers, Richard said, hey Luke I think this is an enchated Park we must avoid to eat any fruit and don't pluck flower or else we would fall in danger......
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there were big trees laden with tasty and colourful fruits, lush green grass and varities of beautiful flowers, Richard said, hey Luke I think this is an enchated Park we must avoid to eat any fruit and don't pluck flower or else we would fall in danger......
"But I'm hungry." Luke said.
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"But I'm hungry." Luke said.
And he started...
...then Luke seemed to become moody because of hunger... At that time, Luke walked in the tired way. He looked around and saw many,many trees that full of tasty fruit. However, he reminded himself that those fruit were poisonous. He sighed " I am really hungry, Richard!"
Talking about the beast, he was even worst than Luke as he was hugry since he was in the other world.
Beast's mum cried out" How do you know those fruit are poisonous, Rechard?".........
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Richard said," because I have read the story of Beauty and the Beast, when the Beauty's father plucked the flower from the garden her daughter imprisioned in the Beast's palace, that's why I am doubtful and fear the same would happened to us." By the time Richard stopped talking what he saw, Beast was eating a large banana.............
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......"Stop!" three of them shout out to the beast.
Unfortunately, the beast son had eaten a big mouth of banana already. It was too late to stop the beast. Sunddenly, the beast felt dizzy, hung over. It just liked the beast had drunk alcohol... Then the beast fell down unconsciousness on the ground..........

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...Beast's mom started crying and said, "Oh my God what we are going to do now?" "that's why I warned everybody", Richard said. Suddenly they saw a Rabbit hopping and jumping towards them and trying to say something..............
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The rabbit looked familiar and the three of them wondered who it was.

"It's Bugs Bunny!!' Luke exclaimed!

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