Let´s write a story!

[blouen]

Hi friends in usingenglish,

Let´s write a story absolutely original from the author-members of usingenglish.
I would write the first line and you could add your own thoughts to further the story till we could agree with one conclusion. You could either write a line or a paragraph. Any ideas are accepted. The next writer should build on the last scene of the story. Let´s start.


Once upon a time, there was a man named Richard. He lives on a treehouse near a river.
He lives with his little brother, Luke, who always tag along with him.

One day...(you continue the story)

[sothon]

One day, both of them went down to the river to catch fish.

[blouen]

On the way to the river, they heard a noise by the bush as though somebody is lurking on them.

[sothon]

However, they tried to be ignored eventhough they felt scaring. Because they heard that there were an unknown thing always follow the people in the village, they pretended to be ignore in order to find out what it was.

[blouen]

The sound kept following them and they also kept ignoring it.
They finally reached the river. Richard and Luke took a bath in the cool waters from morning till dawn.

[Veron1]

Suddenly they heard a women screaming.They ran to find out what's happening as they believe there is no human being except them in this isolated island.......

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[DivingDeep]

....and when they reached there someone is going at her with a knife.her eyes is growing wide in fear.help please help! she is in desperate need of help.

[DivingDeep]

Originally Posted by Veron1

Suddenly they heard a women screaming.They ran to find out what's happening as they believe there is no human being except them in this isolated island.......

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I think it must be woman.

[Veron1]

Originally Posted by DivingDeep

I think it must be woman.

Sure ,she is

I.A

[Harry Smith]

They helped her and she was very happy to stay alive. She thanked them and told them her story.......