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The tata Nano is the cheapest car in the world. What remains to be seen is it will able to sustain its first impression and the most important will it end the dominance of Maruti cars in the Indian market or it just poses a threat to the small car segment players. The story will unfold itself in six months, till then just wait and watch

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The Tata Nano is the cheapest car in the world. The question, however, remains [as to] whether it will be able to sustain its first impression, and, if so, will it end the dominance of Maruti cars in the Indian market? Whether the Tata Nano poses a threat to the small car segment players or not remains to be seen. The story will unfold in the next six months. Until then, we'll have to just wait and see.