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Default An excellent business idea

A sentence on the box:
Open up for an excellent business idea

can you suggest any different sentence based on the lines of above sentence

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Default Re: An excellent business idea

Perhaps:
Open this box. Find an excellent business idea inside.
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How about this

From outside it looks just a box
Inside it has an excellent business idea
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Inside it has an excellent business idea
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How is this

From the outside, it looks like just a box
On the inside it has an excellent business idea
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