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Old 05-Feb-2009, 11:38
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If I get any problem in my personal life. surely I'll reach you.
At home,parents are in a hurry to get me married. But I am defering my acceptance for marriage. Luckily, there are no marriage proposals for us . I would like to stay in the same company for a couple of years and have bank balance. I think it is a good decision to do so.

Both of you are staying away from parents but some elders guidance is required in the initial stage of marital life. Sometimes, I think what you did regarding marriage is almost correct.You are one among the people who get mails from my mail box. I will be available all the time.
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Old 08-Feb-2009, 09:15
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Looks fine to me.
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If I get any problem in my personal life. surely I'll reach you.
At home,parents are in a hurry to get me married. But I am defering my acceptance for marriage. Luckily, there are no marriage proposals for us . I would like to stay in the same company for a couple of years and have bank balance. I think it is a good decision to do so.

Both of you are staying away from parents but some elders guidance is required in the initial stage of marital life. Sometimes, I think what you did regarding marriage is almost correct.You are one among the people who get mails from my mail box. I will be available all the time.
hi
no need to repeat for marriage
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