please help edit my personal statement.

[tyav007]

westland

 

[emsr2d2]

Please I need my personal statement for the PRESSID scholarship edited. Thanks.

Focus: why u want to study overseas, why u wish to obtain the qualification and ur chosen research area, and ·********Hw u think u’ll benefit in terms of ur career n personal development from obtaining this scholarship and the resulting qualification once uhave returned to ur home country.

I do not believe for one second that the scholarship paperwork used the words as you have typed them above as the focus. I have marked in red the non-standard English. If that is how the institution you are applying to writes, then I suggest you steer well clear of them and get a scholarship somewhere where they speak good English.