Gaya87
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1. A lawyer and an architect’s almost-failed arranged marriage worsens when their siblings enter the picture.
2. An architect named Daniel is arranged to marry Diana, a lawyer. The marriage turns out tumultuous, as their ego and past failures quickly afflict the already-failing relationship. It just keeps on rolling downhill, especially upon discovering that their elder siblings have once been lovers. Surprisingly, their siblings willingly put their differences aside, and carefully pave a harmonious road for Daniel and Diana's marriage.
1. A lawyer and an architect’s almost-failed arranged marriage worsens when their siblings enter the picture.
2. An architect named Daniel is arranged to marry Diana, a lawyer. The marriage turns out tumultuous, as their ego and past failures quickly afflict the already-failing relationship. It just keeps on rolling downhill, especially upon discovering that their elder siblings have once been lovers. Surprisingly, their siblings willingly put their differences aside, and carefully pave a harmonious road for Daniel and Diana's marriage.