... but essential aspect to/in/for/of understanding why the events were so devastating.

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Hi there! For some reason this has really stumped me. I don't know which of the following is correct. Some just don't sound right and I am not sure why, others do but seem kind of wrong. "aspect in" sounds the most correct to me but I am not sure why. Any help appreciated :)

1. The abuse they suffered is an upsetting but essential aspect to understanding why the events were so devastating.
2. The abuse they suffered is an upsetting but essential aspect in understanding why the events were so devastating.
3. The abuse they suffered is an upsetting but essential aspect for understanding why the events were so devastating.
4. The abuse they suffered is an upsetting but essential aspect of understanding why the events were so devastating.
 

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Hi there, and welcome. :)
Can you tell us the source of those sentences please?
 

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Hi there, and welcome. :)
Can you tell us the source of those sentences please?
Hi! They are sample sentences I wrote similar to the sentence I will be using in an essay.
 

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I suggest you rephrase the sentence. For example:
The abuse they suffered is upsetting, but it is essential to understanding why the events were so devastating.
You could use "an essential aspect" instead of just "essential" in that sentence, but I prefer the shorter version.
 

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The preposition of is the best one in the original sentence. However, I strongly agree with teechar that you should rephrase the sentence.
 

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I suggest you rephrase the sentence. For example:
The abuse they suffered is upsetting, but it is essential to understanding why the events were so devastating.
You could use "an essential aspect" instead of just "essential" in that sentence, but I prefer the shorter version.
Thank you so much for your help!
 

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