HanibalII
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Hey all, another question.
I've got an infuriating problem that my lecturer has not told me how to solve.
Earlier in the year, I used the phrase "In this essay I will explore" and was told that is incorrect for academic use. But didn't actually say which part.
Can anybody tell me which?
I have a feeling it's the "I will" section.
So would that lead me to believe saying "This essay will explore"? Or "In this essay the following points will be discussed"?
Cheers
I've got an infuriating problem that my lecturer has not told me how to solve.
Earlier in the year, I used the phrase "In this essay I will explore" and was told that is incorrect for academic use. But didn't actually say which part.
Can anybody tell me which?
I have a feeling it's the "I will" section.
So would that lead me to believe saying "This essay will explore"? Or "In this essay the following points will be discussed"?
Cheers