goodboybkk
Junior Member
- Joined
- May 5, 2023
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Indonesian
- Home Country
- Indonesia
- Current Location
- Thailand
@Tarheel
Thanks for your offer to correct that essay.
Is there any mistake in this paragraph?
From an overall perspective, there are two primary reasons why I have a feeling that taking online course is more beneficial than attending a class in person. Perhaps the cogent reason why people are in favour of this notion is because online course saves money. This is because students do not have to pay for travel. For a particular example, a Vietnamese student taking English lesson does not have to travel a long way to the UK or the US and they can stay in Vietnam instead, which means a huge saving of travelling . A further point in particularly favour of this idea is that students can study anytime. Unlike in the dim and distant past when the Internet was not available, students nowadays can study with other students or meet their online teachers at midnight.
Thanks for your offer to correct that essay.
Is there any mistake in this paragraph?
From an overall perspective, there are two primary reasons why I have a feeling that taking online course is more beneficial than attending a class in person. Perhaps the cogent reason why people are in favour of this notion is because online course saves money. This is because students do not have to pay for travel. For a particular example, a Vietnamese student taking English lesson does not have to travel a long way to the UK or the US and they can stay in Vietnam instead, which means a huge saving of travelling . A further point in particularly favour of this idea is that students can study anytime. Unlike in the dim and distant past when the Internet was not available, students nowadays can study with other students or meet their online teachers at midnight.