Rachel Adams
Key Member
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Georgia
- Current Location
- Georgia
"Other public places", "other waste", "do an awful action"
Could you check my test please? Can I use "and other waste" and "other public places" and "doing a lot of other awful actions"?
"Many people are dumping dangerous chemicals and other waste into rivers, seas and oceans. In addition, they are cutting down trees and doing a lot of other awful actions. Speaking for myself, even my children don't take out the rubbish in the street and other public places. Based on the above, the science fiction story I read looks like the true. (It is a story about our future. People will have to move to another planet because the earth has no resources.)
We have to start changing the way we live, little by little."
I think " don't take out the rubbish" should be "don't litter." I am not sure if it should be "we should start changing the way" or "we should start to change."
Could you check my test please? Can I use "and other waste" and "other public places" and "doing a lot of other awful actions"?
"Many people are dumping dangerous chemicals and other waste into rivers, seas and oceans. In addition, they are cutting down trees and doing a lot of other awful actions. Speaking for myself, even my children don't take out the rubbish in the street and other public places. Based on the above, the science fiction story I read looks like the true. (It is a story about our future. People will have to move to another planet because the earth has no resources.)
We have to start changing the way we live, little by little."
I think " don't take out the rubbish" should be "don't litter." I am not sure if it should be "we should start changing the way" or "we should start to change."