chunchuntthn
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- Joined
- Sep 15, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Vietnamese
- Home Country
- Vietnam
- Current Location
- Vietnam
A free day
Today is my free day. I don’t go to work. I must not receive any phonecalls related my job. So I do some houseworks. I go into my storage and take the vacuum cleaner out of the shelves. I use a towel cleans outside it, I switch on the power of it and start cleaning the floor of my storage. I work very hard within an hour so the floor of my storage is very clean, tidy and fresh.
Then I walk out of my storage and go into the chicken. I wash my dishes and pots. I wash inside as well as outside it. Then I pick them up the shelves.
I go in my bedroom. I take all of dirty clothes and bring to the chicken. I put them into the washing machine. About hour later, they are washed.
Please correct my short paragraph.
Today is my free day. I don’t go to work. I must not receive any phonecalls related my job. So I do some houseworks. I go into my storage and take the vacuum cleaner out of the shelves. I use a towel cleans outside it, I switch on the power of it and start cleaning the floor of my storage. I work very hard within an hour so the floor of my storage is very clean, tidy and fresh.
Then I walk out of my storage and go into the chicken. I wash my dishes and pots. I wash inside as well as outside it. Then I pick them up the shelves.
I go in my bedroom. I take all of dirty clothes and bring to the chicken. I put them into the washing machine. About hour later, they are washed.
Please correct my short paragraph.