heyuting
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- Mar 17, 2012
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Does this sentence make sense? Thanks.
"Steve Jobs’ 2005 Stanford Commencement Address has encouraged millions of young people; many of them wanted to get advice from Steve Jobs, even Google co-founder Larry Page once paid a visit to Steve Jobs to consult how to create innovative products."
"Steve Jobs’ 2005 Stanford Commencement Address has encouraged millions of young people; many of them wanted to get advice from Steve Jobs, even Google co-founder Larry Page once paid a visit to Steve Jobs to consult how to create innovative products."