Tan Elaine
Key Member
- Joined
- Jun 29, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- English
- Home Country
- Hong Kong
- Current Location
- Hong Kong
1. Our Prime Minister Lee Hsien Loong is the highest paid head of government, more than five times the remuneration of US president Barack Obama.
2. Our Prime Minister Lee Hsien Loong, whose remuneration is more than five times that of US president Barack Obama, is the highest paid head of government.
Is there anything wrong with the first sentence, especially the part in bold? I think the second sentence is fine.
Thanks in advance.
2. Our Prime Minister Lee Hsien Loong, whose remuneration is more than five times that of US president Barack Obama, is the highest paid head of government.
Is there anything wrong with the first sentence, especially the part in bold? I think the second sentence is fine.
Thanks in advance.