Dear TheParser, billmcd,
I really appreciate all your suggestions and I have made some modifications to my script. I post the whole script here and would like to get more advice. (hope that I'm not too greedy!:lol
Thanks in advance!
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Good morning, everyone. My name is 梁海寧,
and my speech topic is 'the day I gave my first English speech'. (change to
'my speech today is...')
I will never forget the day of my first English speech contest.(change to
'I will always remember the day of my first English speech competition) It was held by ACES English School, and I'm one of the students at ACES.
I made a lot of preparations for the competition.(change to
'I spent a great deal of effort preparing for the competition) I asked Kim, my English teacher, to correct the speech script and my pronunciation. I made several invitation cards for my teacher and my best friends at 永安 Elementary School. But unfortunately, I didn't see them there. Maybe they were all busy. It was OK because my father and mother were with me, so I wasn't nervous at all. Not yet.
At first, it wasn't like a contest, it was more like a fun Christmas show. One teacher was wearing funny clothes, introducing the student on the stage in a funny way, you know, it always makes me laugh when foreigners speak Chinese! One student moved his body and waved his hands while he was giving his speech. Another two students were singing, dancing, and suddenly the music stopped! Poor kids, they didn't know what to do next! It wasn't very quiet at the auditorium, either. It was crowded. I belive most of the people were the students' parents, maybe their grandparents, aunts or uncles. I think they were more nervous than their children. Most of the time, I was in another room, talking, running around, laughing and chatting with other boys and girls.
Suddenly, somebody called me. Oh my goodness! It was my turn! I couldn't laugh any more. I was scared, especially when I was standing next to the stage, waiting for my turn. I couldn't remember anything...
Frankly speaking, I don't know how I finished the speech, all I remember is that I rushed from the stage to my mother when I heard the applause from the audience. She gave me a big hug.
Today is the second time I have given a speech in front of so many people. I hope it will be a nice, sweet memory, too. Thank you.