If one topic sentence like that:
Starting school early can benefit not only in terms of children and their families but in society as a whole.
Then I discuss it by using linking words: To begin with, children will.....;In addition, families will.....;Finally, society will.......
Q1. Is this a valid topic sentence? (some people said that it was't, because it contained three ideas: children,families, society;others, however, said that it was, because it contained only one idea, that is "benefit")
I was really confused by this question:-(, would you please help me?
Q2. If this is a valid topic sentence, are there any other words that can replace those words like "To begin with, ...;In addition, ...; Finally..."?
I dislike using those words because it seems a bit mechanical.
Starting school early can benefit not only in terms of children and their families but in society as a whole.
Then I discuss it by using linking words: To begin with, children will.....;In addition, families will.....;Finally, society will.......
Q1. Is this a valid topic sentence? (some people said that it was't, because it contained three ideas: children,families, society;others, however, said that it was, because it contained only one idea, that is "benefit")
I was really confused by this question:-(, would you please help me?
Q2. If this is a valid topic sentence, are there any other words that can replace those words like "To begin with, ...;In addition, ...; Finally..."?
I dislike using those words because it seems a bit mechanical.