K KrissyCole Guest Apr 12, 2010 #1 "He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?
"He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?
emsr2d2 Moderator Staff member Joined Jul 28, 2009 Member Type English Teacher Native Language British English Home Country UK Current Location UK Apr 12, 2010 #2 KrissyCole said: "He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct? Click to expand... I'm afraid I don't actually understand what you mean by that sentence, which makes it difficult to help. Could you post some alternatives that you think might work, so that we get a better idea of what you mean? Thanks.
KrissyCole said: "He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct? Click to expand... I'm afraid I don't actually understand what you mean by that sentence, which makes it difficult to help. Could you post some alternatives that you think might work, so that we get a better idea of what you mean? Thanks.