[Essay] Rephrasing

[KrissyCole]

"He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?

 

[emsr2d2]

"He forces himself to lessen his own care of good." How can I rephrase that sentence to make it sound better or more correct?

I'm afraid I don't actually understand what you mean by that sentence, which makes it difficult to help.

Could you post some alternatives that you think might work, so that we get a better idea of what you mean? Thanks.