Last summer, I and my group (my group and I) spent our holiday on the Vung Tau Beach. This is one of the beautiful beaches in Viet Nam. It took us two hours to
We concentrated at a bus station. At 5 A.M. (no capitalization -- a.m.) we started our trip by bus. Although I
feelfelt tired after two long hours, the sea air made me re-excited. (Iím not sure if this is the right wording, I would just say, Ďmade me excited againí.)
Gradually (finally?), Bien Dong (Since itís the first time you mention this name here itís better to say what the Bien Dong actually is.) was in front of us. The Bien Dongís length is 750 m. with beautiful sea and form of entertainment is multiform. (Start a new sentence after m )
We arranged our bags and after that we
quicklyswum in the blue sea. The weather was very nice. The golden light was spreading on inthe white sand. The tiny waves were crashing onto the beach. It is suitable for swimming. (What is suitable? The waves, the sea...?) After swimming, we started to build sandcastles, listened to the sounds of the waves, felt the salted taste of the sea and enjoyed some special foods.
In the afternoon, we rode around on the road from the back
of the beachto the front of the beach by double-bicycles. ThatThere was a wonderful sight: the sea on one side and the mountains on the other. One sight is sea, the others is mountain.It really made me forget everything toand relax. And then, we decided to climb tothe Tao Phung mountain. Sightseeing is as beautiful as the other places. (Iím not sure what this follows on from) So we took many photographs. The Standing Godís shoulder is great. We can sawcould see the mountains, houses and the wide sea. When we were climbing down the mountain, we bought some souvenirs for our friends.
AThe day gowent by so fast. I wanted to stay there longer but we had to come back to work the day after. (the next day) The trip was short but it had a strong impression on me. and I had many memories with my friendsMy friends and I have many memories of that day. We comecame back to Bien Hoa city and felt comfortable after a good holiday.
Student or Learner