Allen165
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- Aug 8, 2009
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- Canada
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- Switzerland
Because of the importance of amateur sport, sports federations have an obligation to promote the overall interests of their respective sports. To that end, they redistribute some of the revenues from the commercial exploitation of their respective sports downwards to the grassroots of the game.
Is it necessary to repeat "their respective sports"? Can the second "their respective sports" be replaced with something else? "Those sports" just doesn't sound right to me here. Perhaps "the sports"? Or simply "their sports"?
Thanks.
Is it necessary to repeat "their respective sports"? Can the second "their respective sports" be replaced with something else? "Those sports" just doesn't sound right to me here. Perhaps "the sports"? Or simply "their sports"?
Thanks.