vectra
Member
- Joined
- Jun 16, 2005
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Ukraine
- Current Location
- Ukraine
Hello,
Here are the lines from a student's homework assignment with my corrections:
'We would be very pleased if you [STRIKE]would be present[/STRIKE] agreed to be a featured speaker at the program, the topic of which is “Advice on personal finance”. This part of the program will last 10 minutes. Some funny stories from your personal business experience could be included. Also there [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] could/might be some phone calls from interested people, so please be ready.'
Is it OK to use my corrections in this context?
Thank you in advance.
Here are the lines from a student's homework assignment with my corrections:
'We would be very pleased if you [STRIKE]would be present[/STRIKE] agreed to be a featured speaker at the program, the topic of which is “Advice on personal finance”. This part of the program will last 10 minutes. Some funny stories from your personal business experience could be included. Also there [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] could/might be some phone calls from interested people, so please be ready.'
Is it OK to use my corrections in this context?
Thank you in advance.