Anastasia-Rus
New member
- Joined
- Nov 28, 2012
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Russian Federation
I've written a short advertising text but cannot make it sound good. Please help!
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[FONT="]In this section we offer only the best what the Czech Republic and its wizards with their hand can offer: traditional glass souvenirs, beer cosmetics, Czech garnet, and products made of Czech crystals. Here you will find the best Czech restaurants and beerhouses with traditional Czech menu, and houses where one can take a beer bath. You can find various handicrafts here as well. In this section you will find things that you can bring home and that will make you happy many years and evoke good memories about the hospitable Czech Republic.[/FONT]
Thank you!
Here is the paragraph:
[FONT="]In this section we offer only the best what the Czech Republic and its wizards with their hand can offer: traditional glass souvenirs, beer cosmetics, Czech garnet, and products made of Czech crystals. Here you will find the best Czech restaurants and beerhouses with traditional Czech menu, and houses where one can take a beer bath. You can find various handicrafts here as well. In this section you will find things that you can bring home and that will make you happy many years and evoke good memories about the hospitable Czech Republic.[/FONT]
Thank you!