[Grammar] In addition To

[Loh Jane]

Hi English Teachers,
Please help me check and let me know whether this sentence is acceptable, thanks in advance.
In addition to eating a meal of Mcdonald, I ate a meal of KFC yesterday evening.

 

[billmcd]

Hi English Teachers,
Please help me check and let me know whether this sentence is acceptable, thanks in advance.
In addition to eating a meal [STRIKE]of [/STRIKE] at McDonald's, I ate a meal [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] at KFC yesterday evening (or "last evening").

AmE. And how many calories?? :shock:

 

[emsr2d2]

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