"Nested" phrases

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Larisa_rog

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Please tell me what of the following "nested" phrases is correct:

The cost of Services hereunder shall be VAT free based on Sub-clause 2 of Clause 2 of Article 149 of Chapter 21 of Tax Code of the Russian Federation.

Or:

The cost of Services hereunder shall be VAT free based on Tax Code of the Russian Federation, Chapter 21, Article 149, Clause 2, Sub-clause 2.

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MikeNewYork

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Please tell me what of the following "nested" phrases is correct:

The cost of Services hereunder shall be VAT free based on Sub-clause 2 of Clause 2 of Article 149 of Chapter 21 of Tax Code of the Russian Federation.

Or:

The cost of Services hereunder shall be VAT free based on Tax Code of the Russian Federation, Chapter 21, Article 149, Clause 2, Sub-clause 2.

Thank you in advance

I would use the second. The controlling authority is the Tax Code. The remainder narrows that down to the individual statement.
 

Barb_D

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I agree. The second one is MUCH easier to follow.
 
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