holdenenglish
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Dear teachers
I tried to write a sentence as below, but not sure if it's grammatical. Please advise if any edits and make it read better:
Mr. Stowell is a typical half-educated who is susceptible to any intellectual fad that he may use to demonstrates his superiority to the masses.
Regards
Holden
I tried to write a sentence as below, but not sure if it's grammatical. Please advise if any edits and make it read better:
Mr. Stowell is a typical half-educated who is susceptible to any intellectual fad that he may use to demonstrates his superiority to the masses.
Regards
Holden
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