[Essay] LETTER WRITING

[maielts]

Hi ,

I am applying for one Exam where I need to write Letter under 150 Words in 20 mins.
I have written the following , please verify and let me know the changes required in terms of accuracy , grammar , and spelling

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Q -


I have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English- speaking friend. in you letter


1- Explain why you have moved
2- Describe the new house
3- Invite your friend to come and visit


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Dear Ravi,


Hope this letter finds you in good health.I am happy to inform you that, I have moved to another house in the same locality.


As I might mentioned to you earlier that my parents are coming here next month end.Therefore I started searching a little bigger house which will give us enough space for our family.


Fortunately, I have found a good house near my previous apartment; which is having a big mater bedroom with ample of light coming from its window,modular kitchen , another bedroom for my parents, a store room and two bathrooms in it.

I am pleased to invite you for a small party ; which I will be organising 15th of next month.It will also help us to meet again after a long duration.Please try to come with you family and kids.


Hoping to hear from you soon.


Your Faithfully,
Mayank Khare

 

[Barb_D]

So this is your practice letter?